Piracy Script Remix

Well, I shot out the script to a group of people for review.

Final comments: it draaaaags ooooooon, repeats the points too much, and lacks non-narrated moments. As one person said “I feel like I got clubbed on the head repeatedly”. I decided to give it a week, and then come back to it all. As it turns out: They’re right.

What that means is that I’m reworking the script, and jetissoning alot of the research. Or at least streamlining it all. It’s a balance between educating people on piracy, and boring them to death. I also need interview material; but who, and how to fit it in is problematic. Furthermore, I need to do this fast: If I wait too long, the movie will loose relevancy.