It’s taken nearly a month to do it, but I’ve finished the second full draft of Rice Tea. The entire text has been extensively revised.
For the most part, I found that I was being needlessly descriptive. I was also fairly technical about events in the book. Both counts have been addressed. I found that I could cut down on much of the jargon without affecting the content. I just won’t go out of my way to say that Seth downloaded the worm’s update from the repository of a honeypot project.